Archive for August, 2009

Discovery

Tuesday, August 18th, 2009
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Here be dragons!

Writing is such an interesting way to self-discovery.  I don’t mean to sound all high-brow and deep, but as I’m sitting toying with the revisions for Djinn and thinking about what the future may hold, I feel like I’ve crossed over a self-imposed limitation.  And it feels liberating and amazing. 

But onto more things linked to the title of this post: discovery.  Revising Djinn has led me to realise many things, chiefly that it is a lot of work.  Personally, I thought that writing it was where all the hard grafting was – sniggers – boy, if ONLY I had known.  *narrows eyes at other writerly types who nod sagely at this point*

But, having said how much hard grafting it is, it is also very much an eye opening experience.  I’ve realised that a) the book moves forward quite rapidly and does not drag its feet as I had initially feared and b) that Nicholas needs more verbal screen time.  He is in danger of becoming a bit angsty and internal…and as much as I love other people writing intense internal dialogue for their characters, it does not suit Nicholas or Djinn, at present and c) the rapport between Jenny and Nicholas is really good but I am worried about potential luuuurve interest, which is not the direction I want this to go in at all.  Not in this their first book, at least!

A further discovery is how much research I had uncovered for Djinn and how much I had lived and breathed it for such a long time.  The germ for Djinn struck me back in 2007 and I created a folder dedicated to that alone and crammed every bit of research I could find into it for months.  But it sat in the back of my head and stewed.  In the meantime I did other Stuff.  Then this year it all came pouring out in one fell swoop.  Is that odd? I hope that it is.  I can’t afford to ruminate that long over new storylines!  Not if I want any type of writing career.

I’ve got a deadline for the revising and amendments which is Friday, 28th August, which is when I will be printing it off and handed it over to my personal hero(ine) Jamie, for more checking.  She is kick-ass and I know she won’t pull punches.  I’ve already asked / warned her and by all accounts, she has her red pen ready!  Jamie will be the first person, apart from me, who would have read Djinn in its entirety.  Needless to say I am excited but terrified (in a good way) at the same time.

Right – enough jibba jabba from me.  Off to ruminate on plotslines and character creation.

The 3 R’s

Sunday, August 16th, 2009

Girl ReadingThis past week turned out to be a genuine holiday! 

I thought it was going to be a bit of a waste of my time and although I struggled with our pointless neighbours’ dog barking incessantly for hours on end during the course of every day - I kid you not – I ended up listening to a lot of music, really loudly and also reading.  A lot.  Four books in 3 days.  Impressive, no? 

During the week, I picked up my printed copy of CURSE OF THE DJINN to revise and after the first twenty pages I realised my heart wasn’t in it.  I set it aside and went for a long walk instead.

I’ve not gone back to it yet.  It’s sitting on our small coffee table in the lounge, neatly packaged in its elastic bands, keeping it from falling everywhere.  I still feel proud but am now officially terrified of it.  This new week will be revising week.  Wish me luck.

This week will be writing reviews week. 

I’ve read the following books this past week whilst on holiday:

  • Girl from Mars by Julie Cohen – aimed at adults, a lighthearted romance novel from Little Black Dress Books  – such a good read which will easily be overlooked by the more serious literary readers and to be honest, it will be their loss.  Girl from Mars is an excellent read!  Especially if you are a fan of science fiction and fantasy. 
  • Hunger Games 1 by Suzanne Collins by Scholastic – YA novel – if you’ve not read it, where have you been?  Under a rock like me?  I read HG1 in one day.  Several sittings, but one day.  The following day I picked up
  • Hunger Games 2 – Catching Fire by Suzanne Collins  by Scholastic – YA novel – the follow-up to HG1.  Not yet available in the shops, but take my word when I solemnly declare it to be ridiculously good.  And to make sure you buy a copy to read.  
  • The Secret of the Pink Carnation by Lauren Willig – a historical drama with a side-step into romance,  set during Napoleonic times, it’s a little bit Dumas, a little bit Scarlet Pimpernel and a little bit James Bond – only in petticoats. 

 This week I’ve got Nekropolis to read, as well as The Reformed Vampire Support Group.  As well as Djinn for revising purposes.

I have an entire bag of research for Book 2 but am terrified of looking at it.  Such hard work, to be honest!  The 300 pages or so I had printed off on a variety of subject needs to narrowed dramatically into something I can work with.  I have a large lever arch folder full of research for Djinn.  I’ve called it ”The Nicholas Bible” purely because everything about Nicholas and the djinn is in there – historial research as well as character “sketches”.  If I lost TNB whilst writing I would be lost. 

So now I’m hesitant to beging book 2 – TPP – as I’ve no idea where it’s going yet – too many ideas and sub-plots, so I need to ruminate more.  Less of the gung-ho and more of the braincells burning, y’know?

Oh, also – rewatched Twilight on Saturday by myself, whilst eating pizza (Mark was off playing Dark Heresy with some friends) and I have to say:  I liked it a lot more the second time around.  I was less critical and less prone to mutter “that’s not how it was in the book”.  I am really looking forward to New Moon.  And did I mention that I am totally Team Jacob?

Weirdly liberated

Thursday, August 6th, 2009

It’s been a strange two weeks, I have to admit.

Not working on Djinn and trying desperately not to think about it, has been odd – weirdly liberating, in fact. 

I have been reading – a lot.  I have also been catching up on some zzz’s.  And on what is happening in the world in general. 

This coming week, the second week in August, is my week’s holiday.  It will be dedicated to reading the draft, nitpicking and worrying at the ms. 

The holiday will also mean a visit to the British Museum as well as the Museum of London.  For no other reason than to mooch. 

I like mooching. 

Bookstores and museums call for mooching. Slow strolls and lots of thoughts about an interesting object or book. 

Talking HeadsThen I may meet up with my friend Karen to talk writing, books, and then hubby Mark may stop by and we may have a brainstorming session or just talk all at once, in a fury of words, about writing, movies, comics, graphic novels, novels, fantasy, urban fantasy, DnD and whatever else we can think of. 

To an outsider we must appear utterly and completely frigging nutz.  Nothing else exists outside of this small circle of talk going on.  We’ve had people leave our vicinity in the past due to serious and intense conversations getting out of hand with gestures getting bigger and wilder and voices getting raised and laughter – oh, the laughter!

There isn’t really much else planned for next week, to be honest.  Just making notes on the draft, revising and then revising some more, fixing  a few things that I know need fixing.  And drawing up a wishlist of agents to approach in a few weeks’ time.  *insert terrified face*

Oh, one thing I am thinking of doing is looking through some of my previous stories and short stories I wrote to gauge how much my writing has changed.  I am sure it has.  I remember being addicted to long chunky phrases and raptuous descriptions of sunsets and deep melancholy thoughts…but that was only a month ago fortunately a good long time ago and it’s going to be very interesting to see if I’ve improved!  I honestly hope I have!

I may even stick a few items on here for you to point and snicker at.  See, I am just that open to ridicule!